Sunday 10 March 2013

Biographical writing


My first two books—Clive Caldwell Air Ace and Jack Davenport Beaufighter Leader—were biography, Australian Eagles is a collection of biographical essays and my current work in progress, fondly known as The Opus (with a working title of Australia’s Few. An Intimate History of the Battle of Britain) has a strong biographical focus.
A few years ago, Allen & Unwin asked me to muse on my experiences of biography for their Writing Centre and I thought you might be interested in my thoughts...
Writing biography is a challenge. The intimacy is engrossing and the responsibility to accurately record a person’s life within the historical context is overwhelming. But it is so fulfilling. I have no background in historical writing and I fell into biography by accident but I learned much which might make biographical writing easier for other novices.
I recently read of an author who, before putting keystroke to sceen, was advised to read other biographies to see what worked and what didn’t. The author ignored that advice and it is obvious. My first suggestion, then, is read constantly: biography, memoir, history and literary fiction. Absorb and analyse. Deconstruct, criticise and appreciate. Develop an appreciation of structure and ‘flow’. Target your reading to the ‘life and times’ of your subject to gain a sense of the environment in which he or she lived as well as the social influences on his or her actions.
Personal primary source material—interviews, letters, diaries—will always be at the heart of a biography, as will the recollections and writings of contemporaries. When I first started work on Clive Caldwell Air Ace I took my primary sources at face value but before I made too many blunders I read something which has continued to influence my research.
Tom Harrisson was one of the co-founders of Mass-Observation which collected first-hand accounts of how Britons reacted to the Second World War. Thirty years after the Mass-Observation accounts were written Harrisson decided to compare the 1970’s recollection of life in the Blitz with the 1940’s first-hand account. In all cases, including one of his own treasured recollections, there were considerable differences. For the first time, I realised that memory was fallible so decided to treat it as a starting point, rather than an established fact.
This stood me in good stead as both Caldwell and Davenport, without any intention to deceive, had made memory slips and their accounts often did not stand up to the official record. Wherever possible, I checked each recollection against official and other recorded accounts. Occasionally, I could not sort out a discrepancy, so I just acknowledged it. That is what end notes are for! And this leads me another important point: biography is history and future readers will want to know your sources. So include end notes and a detailed bibliography.
My final suggestions relate to ‘readability’. I was always conscious that the technical aspects of military aviation should be accessible to the ‘ordinary’ reader so non-aviation friends read through my manuscripts and highlighted areas which went over their heads. An aviation expert also read them to correct my technical errors. For the Davenport manuscript I engaged a professional editor to work with me before I submitted it to Allen & Unwin: friends are usually too kind to point out literary and structural flaws. I cannot recommend these strategies enough because, believe me, if you have no background in your subject’s area of expertise, you will make mistakes and, we might as well admit it, we never see flaws in our own work!
 





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